Name: The Gathering Storm - A Group XS Story
Rating: 4.9 (12 reviews)
Author: Hidden Darkness

Anonymous on 2025-01-18 15:05:45Z

5.0

I hope in the future you will write a story in which Serena and Alex will be the main characters, and not episodic, as it was before. Thank you for your work!

sue on 2024-10-16 11:21:57Z

5.0

I like your detailed description of the infusion of fluids, and I wonder if you would consider depicting a girl with a broken limb being fed like this

120witcher on 2024-07-22 01:11:23Z

5.0

Love the scene with Georgina and her twin daughters, hope the two girls are kept as leather clad faceless toys! Would really love to see more of them. Great story and writing!

120witcher on 2024-07-22 01:11:21Z

5.0

Love the scene with Georgina and her twin daughters, hope the two girls are kept as leather clad faceless toys! Would really love to see more of them. Great story and writing!

Anonymous on 2024-05-30 04:39:24Z

5.0

So awesome! Many thanks for this work!

Anonymous on 2024-03-06 18:07:19Z

5.0

Hey hidden darkness not sure if you are aware but the challenge I have with responding to feedback questions on thefetlibrary is that you can only post to a story once. I have allready responded so now I'm using a vpn and anonymous to post a 2nd. So if you were wondering why you are getting so little response this might be part of it. Maybe if you have something like twitter handle or something you could share it would be easier to respond. Now as for my feedback on the last chapter. I am always a big fan of choke gag. It's simple and yet devious. So that was going to be my answer... until you cuffed a mother by having her fist her daughters! That ... WOW that! Creative, feasible, unique (I've ever read anything close to it at least) and so terribly sadistic. That was truly inspired. As for next time, my initial request for a group x fitting enema punishment still stands. But than again compared to your usage of fisting this time maybe it would actually be best not to request anything and see what your wicked imagination comes up with. 11 out of 10 for the creative sadism alone

Anonymous on 2024-03-06 18:07:19Z

5.0

Hey hidden darkness not sure if you are aware but the challenge I have with responding to feedback questions on thefetlibrary is that you can only post to a story once. I have allready responded so now I'm using a vpn and anonymous to post a 2nd. So if you were wondering why you are getting so little response this might be part of it. Maybe if you have something like twitter handle or something you could share it would be easier to respond. Now as for my feedback on the last chapter. I am always a big fan of choke gag. It's simple and yet devious. So that was going to be my answer... until you cuffed a mother by having her fist her daughters! That ... WOW that! Creative, feasible, unique (I've ever read anything close to it at least) and so terribly sadistic. That was truly inspired. As for next time, my initial request for a group x fitting enema punishment still stands. But than again compared to your usage of fisting this time maybe it would actually be best not to request anything and see what your wicked imagination comes up with. 11 out of 10 for the creative sadism alone

Anonymous on 2024-03-04 20:07:36Z

5.0

As good as the original!

Anonymous on 2024-03-02 21:05:29Z

3.0

Not a fan of how magically group xs just gets everything perfectly to go their way. The bondage was interesting but the actual story rather dull. It's a mostly pointless affair showing how characters we already know end up captives become captives. Nor am I a fan at all how there is a nazi element to this, its tasteless, offensive, and just lazy for someone as talented as you. I think my biggest problem is just how little the victims can do anything. They always get outsmarted, always beaten, always bested. They might as well be mannequins for how much they can actually do anything. They have no hope at all or chance at anything. Realistically some of them should get to a point of mentally snapping to try and either kill themselves or die taking one of group xs with them. There is no reward for being obedient just extra punishment, the dom's are all mostly interchangeable and all evil sadists with no other real character to them. That said I will keep reading and am interested in seeing where it goes. The bondage was all very creative and devious, the ideas presented for the torments was very clever and the victims all felt like different characters and all very distinct. I think what the story needs is some reason for the slaves to not rebel, some reward or relief. Because as it is currently these slaves should realistically be trying to kill their tormentors or themselves and veers toward misery porn For future scenes some markings could be interesting. Not blisters and burning like previously, that felt less erotic and threw me out of the story with how medically that wouldn't work. More like tattoos or brands or having their heads shaved.

Anonymous on 2024-01-09 20:30:09Z

4.0

Though perfectly in line with the source material the idea of blisters and wounds like that are not my thing. That said the story so far is great. The various creative torments are fantastic. The gravity switch was plug and the incorporation of the paintings in her torment in particular oozed a perfect fetishistic creativity. The suitcase was also an excellent use of a character trait that had been well established before neatly tying stories together. As for requests. It always struck me a curious that the usage of large retention enemas was never used as punishment. That would have my vote

Danthehawk on 2024-01-07 16:16:11Z

5.0

Mistress XS, Helga, Olga, all the old freinds are back - hilarious. And the torments getting meaner and meaner. I liked the magnetic nipple clips and Beth's strapping best. Do carry on, I hope this yarn goes on forever!!!

Anonymous on 2024-01-07 01:46:58Z

5.0

Fantastic graphic writings … I cannot wait to see the fate of Catherine and how she is broken down...

GerryC on 2024-01-06 17:37:57Z

5.0

Very nice surprise for the new year! Impressive work ... Looking forward to more of the adventures, especially how Catherine will be faring ...

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